Score: 0

"Dammit dude, stop making these, seriously."

submission: Madness Unloaded Ep.2

date: July 20, 2008

Fuck, how does this shit pass judgment??
Look, I already gave tips, but here they are again. DON'T TWEEN, SPEND MORE THAN 5 MINUTES ON THESE.
And stop submitting pieces of crap that are less than ten seconds.

Score: 0

"Oh my fucking god that sucked."

submission: Madness Unloaded Ep:1

date: July 20, 2008

That was horrible, it was horrifying in all ways. What has newgrounds come to when THIS passes judgment?
I am usually the one to give tips, my tips are, DONT TWEEN, Try to take more than 5 minutes making these, and don't submit everything you make.

Score: 10

"YAMA YAMA HAAAA"

submission: Electro Gypsy

date: July 19, 2008

10!! 10! 10! 10! TEN! That was the BEST thing I have seen in a long time, The song is th most catchy tune I have ever heard in a flash movie.
You sir, have truley amazed me. Thank you.

Score: 10

"WHY KAY BALAYZE!"

submission: SSBB Collab

date: July 17, 2008

Whats up yo. Kick ass movie with kick ass animation and such. Kinda short but still cool.I liked the part with the Luigi and Mario fight.
Oh also, when exporting you could have made the JPG quality much higher, as the movie was only like 2 MB.

Score: 10

"I found it has a point."

submission: Awesome Grounds

date: July 16, 2008

Everyone is just going all bitchy PMS because you're bashing their tasteless love for a highly over rated series. And if you can't hear him, learn how to turn up a damn speaker. Yet it was poorly animated, I give you ten stars for effort and truth.
Awesome Gaiden shouldn't have a higher score than Waterlollies.

Score: 6

"Very good"

submission: Madness combat test 1

date: July 11, 2008

For a first timer. You seem to have the basic movements down, just speed up the fps. If you need any thing, like sprites, sound effects, anything else, message me because I have a big ass sprite and sound sheet, good luck on future animations.

Score: 10

"YES!!!"

submission: First Madness test

date: July 7, 2008

FINALLY!!! FINALLY!! A WORTHY MADNESS TEST.
You see this is the first good madness test I have seen in ages, very nice, your style is awesome.

Score: 6

"Gunner Elite"

submission: Inaguration Scene Creator

date: June 18, 2008

Taken your sprites? That's all mine and krinkels, liar.
Also ok, don't even know if this is yours and you are just submitting it because you saw it on rayne.

Score: 2

"Uh, please read some tips I have."

submission: Madness Extermination

date: May 15, 2008

Now, what was your goal to making this, you wanted to make a good movie, that people would enjoy? Well, it worked for a few cases, However, I seriously would suggest you practice with your work, and not try to submit every thing you animate just for stats, I know it can be pretty tempting to rush on making something, but you gotta know that there really isn't a deadline that you absolutely have to finish it by. If you are doing something for Madness day, I would recommend you start it many months early. Like for example, me. I started my Madness day toon just a few days ago. But in your case, I wouldn't suggest starting a big project unless you get better at madness.
Make tests, like short movies of just one guy shooting something, you know, tests, don't submit them whatever you do, maybe put them on swf up and share your improvement by linking them in your blog...

Now the animation.
Well the plot is ridiculous, but that is probably how it was meant to be.. But I would suggest having a the plot be mentioned in your story, I had no idea what the movie was about untill I read the author comments. Now, the animation, pretty bad, you basicaly have the right movements down, but you only animated them for like, 3 frames, which is bad. I would suggest getting used to a framerate of 24-33. Any madness tribute under that would not be accepted, now when you animate the body, you have to think about, if I were actually shot like this, how would I fall? Don't be lazy with it and just rotate him and move him, actually rotate certain limbs and move them a certain distance.
Speaking of limbs, be sure you get your hands right, that really kinda bugged me, like how the characters would have, two left hands, or two right hands, actually reference your hands to see what it would look like in 2-D.
And what is up with the limbs, seriously, it seems like, the two hands are seperate symbols, but the head and the body and the head, are perfectly stiff together...
Animate your heads!
Like, give it some bounces, or bobs when walking.
Don't be lazy, speaking of lazy..
Near the end where it said "Cencured" or however you spelled it. It should be "Censored" but whatever, well, Never do that in madness, that is just the laziest thing anyone could possible do. I don't see what should have been censored, unless he was like, fucking him or something.

On a final note, practice, practice.. PRACTICE!
You have one of those user names that just seems succesful. Like you could become a great animator one day. Keep trying, you'll get it.
P.S. Next time, make more sprites for your main character, he only had that one angle..

Score: 3

"No."

submission: GreenDragon Kills Betty

date: May 15, 2008

For the flash part, it was much too short with little sense at all. And this whole thing is pretty dumb. Why does everyone hate Betty anyway, he is just a troller trying to piss off over sensitive kids.