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"Oh boy. another scene creator, yaaaaaaaaaaaay....."
*Yawn*
Seriously, these things are waaaay too over done. I mean, there are millions of these, and only one good one I know of. The one good one had a music select and HUNDREDS of different items, but every single Madness scene creator after it just has a few items and then some random room.
You have a one just because you gave the ability to rotate the items, but it was kind of weird doing it though, I would suggest making it so that you click and hold on it, and then press the arrow keys to rotate it. But rotating it is something that is commonly forgotten about, and it makes any scene creator or dress up better, but it will still be a crappy dress up, so bleh.
Author's Response:
How many times? If you don't like scene creators, don't play them!
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Finally, the epic conclusion to this great series, thank you so much, epic all around, the animation was smooth and you are a genious
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Thats what she said
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"I am disappointed at your previous responses..."
Seriously, these people are just trying to help, it is very uncalled for to just erupt at them in their faces..
Now here, is a review made up of constructive criticism,with no insults, only tips, I do warn you that this is a negative review, but hey, you can't always expect EVERYONE to like your movie, well let's get started.
At a first glance I see that this is more along the lines of a test, which belongs on Spam the Web, or some other simaler site. But since it was Madness day, I suppose it was alright.
As for the animation, I would say bad, but with potential. Some of the movements were choppy, while others were kind of smooth. You should practice giving your characters a bit of lean.. As in when they fire a gun, their body moves back a little, you had them to where it was like a statue, and honestly, if you took more time on this, this would have been much better. I liked the whole "elevator thing" because it was pretty clever, but you didn't make it clear that his head was sticking out of the door before they closed, because if he is inside of it, the doors wouldn't take off his head.
The blood animation for that part was badly and lazily done, like you just took the paint brush tool and scribbled a bit, which is BAD. Add more of a spray like animation, like take the hose or something, and watch the water and notice how it sprays, not just sloppily moves down slowly.
I also noticed that the character that got shot has two right hands, go watch some madness movies, and then you'll discover that there are different hands. He also fell really weird, when making him fall, you shouldn't just select his entire body and rotate it to the ground, animate each individual part different, add flow. And when he falls, add a very small bit of a bounce.
Over all this is bad. But you have potential, just TAKE MORE TIME ON YOUR MOVIES. Time is one of the only things that can make your movie a whole lot better. I can understand your rush if you had to finish it before madness day and stuff, but now you have a year, so work on something, and work on it for as long as you can too, if you finish it early, then take the time you have left for your deadline (if any) and add more finishing touches to it, like frames, effects, sounds, animation..
If you are offended by this constructive review by any way, then please leave Newgrounds until you learn that no one is perfect, and there is always room for improvement. People review your movies with a low score for a reason, no one is trying to be mean, they are giving their own opinion, and there is nothing you can do about it, because YOU decided to post it on this site. Whenever you post something, don't just expect solid 10's everywhere.
That is all I have to say. Don't take this review as offensive, because none was meant.
Author's Response:
wow. nice contructed review. im sure these tips will help make my next madness movie kik ass. lul.
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I loved the part where he starts going on about how he downloads the sprites and what not.
That was funny.
what about my movie ):\
Author's Response:
sorry I forgot about u somehow :(
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You guys kicked ass in this one. You are all great animators. Pretty smooth and all, and as always, death has some awesome bloods.
I hope to join you all next year.
Author's Response:
Yeah next year im going to sort it all out properly, so it'll run alot more smoothley.
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This was awesome, the song was great.
Everyone had some really nice parts.
I am gonna watch the second now.
Author's Response:
Thanks man, congrats on DOTM.
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That was hilarious, the animation was great you guys.
The only complaint I have would be the incomplete animation towards the end with only the bodies and stuff.
You could definitely win something
Also- how long was this?
Author's Response:
Iunno, lol Like, 10 mins.
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Good to know you're still animating dude.
This was funny, I liked when he sliced up that one guy and he just exploded.
Happy Madness day
Author's Response:
Dawn of the Madness was awesome! Happy Madness day to you too.
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I see improvement in your recent work. While things are still choppy, they are getting less choppy. I am actually very happy that you stick with really long movies rather then a bunch of short ones.
Regardless, I watched, enjoyed, and voted, and now reviewed.
I have one final question though, where did you get the lightsaber sounds?
Author's Response:
the light saber sounds is from bunny kill 3 vol 2
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That was funny, I like how you made it look like Jesus was surprised, that was good.
One small thing would be the grammar, misspellings, you know, maybe try using a spell checker next time.
But it was funny regardless.
Author's Response:
Yop"
I was happy, that I caught madness day!
Done in 5 Days!!!
anyway, thanx for good rating!
Sunshaft
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