I'd have to agree with James that the vocals in the first half seem a bit quiet. On that note, I think some of the "Go!" and "Come on!" lines seem a bit weak- like they could be said with a bit more energy. It kinda sounds like someone reading off a script. Not the worst delivery, but it still does kinda stand out to me.
Instrumentally, I think you have a super fucking solid piece here. The bass in the second half kinda took me by surprise. It was jazzy, intense, and I loved how guttural it sounded, and how it carried the direction of the latter half of the song. I'm not a musician in the slightest sense, but I feel like the mastering could have been a bit smoother. It sounds a little "compressed," primarily when dealing with the higher synths in the first half, and at the end of the second half.
Those minor details aside, you've definitely got something good going here. I went back and looked at some of your older work from only one year ago, and you've made fantastic improvements. Keep it up!