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[MadnessAnimationTutorial]

Ok first of all-

Heads do not extend that far out from the body. That was the main thing that bugged me about this.
It was bad, the tutorials gave off the wrong and bad ideas. The walking was just horrible. The same up and down animation throughout the entire thing. No changing angles or speeds, just same up and down. And the feet were looped horribly.
The gun thing was also bad. AK-47's give off MUCH more kick back than what you emphasized. That firing you did was more suitable for a Mac 10. And there IS still kick back when walking, it alters the angle of the body.
The "reloading" thing was horrible too. You need to pay more attention to what you're doing, you can't insert a clip straight up into an angled hole. IT'S JUST NOT POSSIBLE.
And will you ever learn how to position the heads. When you're shot, and fall to the ground, your head doesn't just stick up. Learn how to position sprites.

Over all, this was a bad tutorial, note that only people who are actually experts at Madness should make the tutorials.

volt-light responds:

Ok. :)

[Madness Scene Creator 3]

Oh boy. another scene creator, yaaaaaaaaaaaay.....

*Yawn*
Seriously, these things are waaaay too over done. I mean, there are millions of these, and only one good one I know of. The one good one had a music select and HUNDREDS of different items, but every single Madness scene creator after it just has a few items and then some random room.
You have a one just because you gave the ability to rotate the items, but it was kind of weird doing it though, I would suggest making it so that you click and hold on it, and then press the arrow keys to rotate it. But rotating it is something that is commonly forgotten about, and it makes any scene creator or dress up better, but it will still be a crappy dress up, so bleh.

F1Krazy responds:

How many times? If you don't like scene creators, don't play them!

[Fail Submission]

Dude, seriously, stop making these.

Like really, each one is almost exactly like the last, this one you couldn't even drag the objects! They appeared behind the background. At this point, you need to NOT submit every single thing you make just for stats, then work on something that is actually good, and that you have actually tested and not just slapped on this website. Seriously, I am amazed at this website for even letting this pass. the background blocked everything! Also, dude, seriously, scene creators have already been made, so many of them too, and you aren't going to ever have a slight chance of originality making a scene creator, the code is so simple it isn't even funny.
So in closing, take time on a project and not just make something short and slap it on here for stats, don't make scene creators, and practice, Practice PRACTICE!

FamilyGuy05 responds:

I don't even test these. The 4th version will be tested.

[Windows CRAP]

Funny

Nicely done, you did good with all of the pop up messages, and I lol'd at the loading thing for flash..
"Killing your pets"
Also the part where you want it to crash, and it just shows up with a message that says, "click ok to continue" And the ok button is unclickable.
5'd and recommended for the windows collection.

AndrewGlisson11 responds:

YAY! thanks man.

the ok button is supposed to be unclickable though...

thanks for recomending it for the windows collection and voteing 5. i feel that this submission has an unfairly low rateing.

[{{{Balls}}}]

Very little originallity.

The fishy code is everywhere, no credit for that, maybe you should have added a background to this. I did however enjoy the messeges when you lose.

7IsUnlucky responds:

ok ye thanks

[Kill the green dude]

Ehhhhhh

Well, it was pretty lazy.
There was a decent number of deaths. But all that happened when you selected those was that his facial expression changed and there was a small squirt of blood. Work on giving each kill it's own custom pain thing.
The Mcdonalds thing was funny though.

mothballs responds:

thanks lolo

[Dress Up Kitty Jynx]

I guess it is okay

Needs some more items though, also some nice music in the back ground would be cool.

avidlebon responds:

I started running out of room and ideas when I hit the end of this. Originally didn't have music because I listen to my own music while playing flash games, though adding a simple "music on/off" button should take care of both worlds. Thanks for the suggestion!

[Circle's dodging game]

It is ok...

There is large room for improvement on graphics. You think you could have cut the white from the cars? That would have been a very very simple task. Some of the times the cars just swarmed on me and there was no way out no matter what.
Oh and I survived for a minute and 6 seconds. (66 secs)

KaRath responds:

Well done for surviving for so long! Well, cutting the white from the cars would be simple, but I have Paint, not anything else.

[PX9's Madness Dressup V1]

Nice.

Thanks for using my blood, and my poster, and putting my name on the wall. This was a pretty good scene creator Nice!

PlatinumX9 responds:

thanks. goodluck with onsetation.

[Madness Scene Creator!]

Well

It didn't quite cut it, there were characters but there werent some of these basic things,
-Hands
-bloodwounds
-seperate body parts
-wall blood
I would want to be able to controll where I put certain things. But I guess it was okay.
(come to think of it... I might submit a scene creator a bit later :P)

7IsUnlucky responds:

Alright.