Good effort on the music and composition, as I read you were unable to keep the old one up. The title and description of this was very vague and not too convincing. It was apparent that this is a showreel of sorts. I think gradually your animation capabilities showed improvement throughout, and I hope to see this talent applied to future animations, as you definitely have a lot of potential here. Some of those movements and more specifically character body movements, were pretty impressive! Definitely keep at it, but next time I would suggest titling this as a showreel, or an animation-reel if you will, you would be able to attract more criticism and attention possibly. Keep at the anatomy and drawing, and definitely some of those more interesting parts of this.
It's been a while since I've actually watched a movie off of the front page of Newgrounds that really struck me as yours did.. You did an excellent job. The poem was very clever in how it was written and narrated. It kept me captivated in the story, and the story itself also somewhat spoke to me in interesting ways. I really enjoyed the personification of emotion into beautifully illustrated settings of comical representation. Very well done there as well!
Thank you very much for your kind review! That really means a lot to me that you take the time to watch and also write such a thoughtful comment. I'm glad you liked the poem and the artwork as well as the story. I think it's something we can all relate to at times, and the imagery just sets it into extreme examples of those metaphors. Thank you.
Though it does seem like a lot of these were jokes I've heard before recycled, the voice acting and animation were pretty good. However, the random broken and inconsistent background noise started to really bug me towards the end, definitely taking away from the movie.
That's actually pretty cool. I really like this. I love the touch of the ricocheting bullets, and adding a puzzle element to each level is certainly right up my alley.
Pretty fun and addicting game.
Simply, yet fun. I really enjoyed the blood. It was one of those games that is generally fun and not frustrating.
Thanks. Although some people could find it frustrating if they kept dieing over and over.
Fucking hilarious. Excellent sound design.
Woah thank you
I didn't know you had uploaded this track. Pretty damn cool.
Pretty good, you created a nice atmosphere with the track. Loved the sounds and various distortions used as well!
Holy hell you're getting better and better. I think it could have used a bit more of a melody, but you captured a very good atmosphere and did great with the wobble effects and bass.
You really nailed it with that sky and the reflections at the break of the island and waves. It kinda reminds me of a Zelda Wind Waker style. Good work!
Awesome. I love the little quite at the bottom.
Spectacular. Given the understanding of the Flash CS3 layout, this is definitely a pretty solid piece of background art you've got here. It's very captivating, and the coloring is spot on. It almost gives me a bit of an Adam Phillips feel, which is especially impressive. What caught my eye first- aside from the lighthouse of course- was the detail and rigid outline of the leaves on the trees and their respective silhouette. Honestly the only thing that sticks out to me is the amount of blur given to the clouds. I'm assuming since this is background art, the clouds are probably meant to be in motion. Considering this I'd recommend maybe bumping the blur down a few points- only a few. Regardless this is a great piece you've got here.
I have to ask- is this any particular lighthouse you referenced, or one you drew up on your own? You've painted my dream home.
Thankyou very much! I think you're right, I could reduce the blur on the clouds. This isn't any particular lighthouse but it would be a mix of elements from various refence images.
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