Improvement.
I see improvement in your recent work. While things are still choppy, they are getting less choppy. I am actually very happy that you stick with really long movies rather then a bunch of short ones.
Regardless, I watched, enjoyed, and voted, and now reviewed.
I have one final question though, where did you get the lightsaber sounds?
the light saber sounds is from bunny kill 3 vol 2
Funny
That was funny, I like how you made it look like Jesus was surprised, that was good.
One small thing would be the grammar, misspellings, you know, maybe try using a spell checker next time.
But it was funny regardless.
Yop"
I was happy, that I caught madness day!
Done in 5 Days!!!
anyway, thanx for good rating!
Sunshaft
That was cool
The animation was pretty good, you had a nice flow going there.
One suggestion I would make is to fix the grainy sound, one easy way you can do this is by going into the documents of the sound effect and lowering the volume. You don't have to do it by so much, just so it's not right at the top.
That makes the sound not be so grainy and loud and stuff
HAPPY MADNESS DAY.
aight didnt know that ill keep that in mind nxt time.
Potential
You have it. This movie was fucking choppy as hell. Like the other guy said, was this 5 fps??
But looking beyond that, I see that you actually got the sprites arranged right and it wasn't that bad, you know aside from the whole 5 fps or whatever.
The thing that brought my rating down was mainly the lack of a vcam and the choppy moving backgrounds that look like they were half assed while moving.
One thing you should do it look up something called a Flash Vcam. A Vcam is a square shaped symbol that you put in your movie on the top layer, if you make the vcam smaller, it will give the effect of zooming in, if you make it bigger, it will give the effect of zooming out. It's kinda like an easy way to manipulate the stage size.
You should look into using one of those for future animations.
yeah I have seen those square things before but i couldnt find one somewere
I'm not gonna go easy or be generous with you.
Not like a few of the other people here.
This was HORRIBLE!
The first main thing I noticed was that the characters had two right hands, people seriously need to learn how to arrange hands and tell whether or not a hand is right or left. The animation was also really choppy, USE MORE FRAMES, YOU HAVE 16000 OF THEM, STOP RUSHING SHIT. If you want a movie to be taken seriously, you need to atleast make it so that any person who has a good sense of judgement believe that you took over 2 days on this.
And what the fuck? Was this movie animated on one damn layer? The backgrounds constantly moved and were piled up with shit.
And your artwork is horrible, I mean the artwork that you actually made, and not ripped from that ultimate sheet.
Thanks for making me feel good about myself. Oh and by the way, this is my second flash submitted. Just thought I'd let you know.
I agree with tazers.
Seriously, this isn't good, the feet are waaaay off, the plot details make no sense (ie: A guy holding an AK47 right next to a guy getting killed, and instead of retaliating, he just stands there.
The characters had two right/left hands, ands the movement was.. improbable at times.
Also what was the frame rate of this??? 5 fps?? Jeez dude, work.
There are hundreds of other tips in here, but I would honestly run out of space if I tried to give you any more.
Also remember to take more than like two days on something. Take atleast a few months, and remember to animate every single frame, and use layers, lots of them too.
K , i respect your opinion . thanks ect
HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!
THAT WAS AWESOME.
I loved the whole glass fix idea, the action was solid and the animation was very smooth.
The sound was a bit weird sounding though, you should have exported it with more kbps...
But other than that awesome, I bet they regret rejecting you.
Yea, i tried that. My swf. file flew to 4MB. O.o
Thanks for the comment :)
WHY KAY BALAYZE!
Whats up yo. Kick ass movie with kick ass animation and such. Kinda short but still cool.I liked the part with the Luigi and Mario fight.
Oh also, when exporting you could have made the JPG quality much higher, as the movie was only like 2 MB.
it wasn't in my control the JPG quality didn't seem to rise even though i put it on 100%.
glad you liked it..even though the score sucks. O_O
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